Wednesday, 31 October 2018

The storm

We are learning to write metaphors, similes and personification.
Personification is when you give an object a human action.


The Storm
The storm is a stealthy panther,
Wild and furious,
It  crouches and backs up,
Black as the clouds,
Growling as loud as the wind beneath trees
Attacks and eats all houses,
Destroys the land leaving paw marks,
Untamed, wild, grumpy,
Trees destroyed, rivers flooded
Landscape has changed, rivers are muddy,
By Ella-Jaye.


2 comments:

  1. hi Ella-jaye
    i really like how you said the panther was a storm.

    from Abby

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